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I Brought You a Letter!

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Commission info is on my page.

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I frequently post progress pictures of all the plushies I make. :la:
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to start you did wonderful work, i had a hard time finding flaws, but you wanted a critique so here it is : the ears seem too big and dis portioned to the face as well as the eyes. also derpys snout seems far too small then again it could be due to the proportion to the eyes. the color of derpys body seems... iffy, it seems close to the right color but a little dark, and as for the hat i dont understand the rope-thing, you have you could have tucked it under derpys chin or did away with it all together with a magnet, i personally think making it longer and tucking it under the chin would have been the better of the two.and finally the buttons, i think you could have done them in the material you used for the rest of the make of derpy, my attention is drawn to it and makes me look away from your other detail work. be aware i do not claim to have your skill and i would love to buy this, you are a great artist and i hope to procure one of these items from you my self